You Took My Sanity

By Templer

When you left you took my life,

It seemed to cut me like a knife.

Now you're gone and so's my heart,

I watched as you tore it all apart.



Since you've been gone I feel crazy,

Everything in my life has become hazy.

To add some insult to this injury,

You finally took my sanity.

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© 2007 Templer86
Published on Monday, April 23, 2007.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Sin On Monday, April 23, 2007, Sin (1143)By person wrote:

    Love is...the remedy, the melody, the poison, and the pain...i liked this, though i think you could more elegantly express your emotions without the constraints of rhyme ~kristy

  • Alanarchy On Monday, April 23, 2007, Alanarchy (1169)By person wrote:

    This would sound great to music.

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