I Need You

By Templer

I need you to comfort me,
In my most desperate time of need.
I need to smell you everywhere,
I love your smell in the air.

I want to bring you to my lips,
And give you my most urgent kiss.
Inside of me you seem to burn,
And forever for you will I yearn.

When I sleep my restless dreams,
I long for you it always seems.
But never will I soon forget,
The day you took my life, you cigarette.

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© 2007 Templer86
Published on Monday, April 23, 2007.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • DeemedHeartless On Friday, April 27, 2007, DeemedHeartless (10)By person wrote:

    amazing personification.

  • Alanarchy On Monday, April 23, 2007, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    Hahahah. Don't I know it. Very clever. Great work, temp. write on!

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