lost thoughts in an empty room...

By Jane

I listened
Just like you said
I held my ear to you
But all I could hear was the wind
And I realized that you’re nothing...
Nothing but an empty shell

And now all I am
Is where you are…
I’m the hollowed ground
That holds you in your sleep

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© 2007 Jane
Published on Tuesday, March 6, 2007.     Filed under: "Journal"
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  • A former member wrote: I am beginning to see a pattern in your work. I love it. ][ ][

  • Eric On Monday, May 14, 2007, Eric (77)By person wrote:

    Love this, great write! I shocked nobody's commented on this. *thumbs up*

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