.:.Plastic Integrity.:.
By DiscordiaDarling
"I don't love you anymore"
Then this house went silent
feeling the hurricane forming in my blood stream
looking at you through the glass
in a dark room...
convincing myself you didn't speak
masquerading to me mesmerized by a molding tile
tracing with my eyes the heart shaped mildew
preserving myself from this moment
"Did you hear me?"
I denied to respond
just get the depiction
I won't pore
You said the malice in my seraphic eyes
would be your redemption
so you choose to crucify me
a silent movie running through my lucid mind
but I can ingeminate your voice
listening to this track over and over
slowly drifting into a drug induced coma
you're smiling at me
crying forever with the integrity of a politician
"It will get better with time, just learn to hate me"
Yet I can't, something in you touched me so deep
and it won't dissolve
I'm rueful I corrupted you're little fantasy.
You quote literature
then basic psychology
Leave me without your plastic sympathy
I'm peeling back the layers
exposing everything you really are
I have nothing to lose now
can you handle it?
melt away into being nothing more
than a figment of my imagination
After all, plastic will always liquefy when it starts to boil.
Awards
Comments on ".:.Plastic Integrity.:."
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On Tuesday, June 9, 2009, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
*this was amazing, I felt everything in this peice was crystal clearand just hit perfectly belowthe belt.astounding.
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A former member wrote:
This is brilliant -edgy, sardonic, cutting and orginal. 'plastic sympathy' -gotta love that...Great write
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On Thursday, March 29, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
got a lingo i dig, will have to check you out more for sure
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On Saturday, February 24, 2007, HattoriHanzo
(21) wrote:
i like all your work but i REALLY like this. sounds like two people so different and only one sees/speaks it as it is... very deep, well-written
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A former member wrote:
"You said the malice in my seraphic eyes
would be your redemption
so you choose to crucify me" Your words here are so powerful. This write drug me in. Well done
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On Saturday, February 24, 2007, jack paper
(126) wrote:
you put things together so well, i'm going to keep an eye on you ...another good write keep 'em comin'
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On Saturday, February 24, 2007, DiscordiaDarling
(26) wrote:
You're such a darling Mylissa. Thank you once again :]
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On Saturday, February 24, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
This was powerful, and beautiful. your thoughts are intriguing. Well done!