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To My Love (Featuring James Lybarger)
By dark_goth_chic666
How softly we kiss;
How much do I miss.
The gentle warmth of your soft tips;
The sharpness of your teeth when you did your nips.
Your sparkling eyes light up my day;
No one can do it your way.
Your the love i seek;
for this heart broken geek.
What can I do to make you come back to me;
cause missing you is hard to flee.
i love you with mind, body and soul;
that much I do know.
how softly we kiss, how much i do miss;
your beaty of seeing me, helod in your arms,
I can't wait to have you once again, but for now,
Can I have a simple kiss.
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© 2007 dark_goth_chic666
Published on Monday, February 12, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, March 15, 2007, Clementine
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wrote:
ack. This i feel needs work, the main flaw is the rhyme. I feel as thought the rhyme comes across WAY TOO forced (see rhyme about nips) if you make it less obvious/unnatural maybe the rest of the piece will speak volumes
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