A note to my love

By Emma Lee

Underneath it all I cry,
Inside it all I die.
You scrape your white teeth,
Along my dirty spine.
You take my love,
From deep inside.
Where am I, without you?
There is no hope, without you.
You are my salvation,
Forgiveness for my sins.
You pave the way,
For my misdeeds to tread.
You shine your light,
On my scarlett head.
You turned wrong to right,
Without you I'm dead.

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© 2007 Emma Lee
Published on Saturday, February 10, 2007.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Bella Butchery On Wednesday, April 18, 2007, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    You scrape your white teeth, Along my dirty spine......i love vertebre....that line had me

  • A former member wrote: Having that one person...whom you KNOW, above all else, you just couldn't survive without...it's an edgy feeling, knowing if it ends, you won't be alright...but it might end anyway. Excellent. ~*Beth*~

  • A former member wrote: beautiful. ~ red.

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