She's Crazy

By Spiked Tongue

My flesh is torn from the pages of your sick tail
i know you long for it to end in my betrayal
you laugh, i cry, you dance, i sigh
you scream, me too, cause i know, i hate you
dance with me and then we cry
play with me and then we die
Forget don't forgive, forgiving is for babies
Regrett don't re-live, re-liveing will not save thee
But break thee it will and scar thee it might
Take thee while still, and bar thee from fright
Do you feel it, the scare
I can hear it, its there
It's sick oh well, i like it - don't tell
can you taste my fear
and that ringing in your ear
i sensed it through your tears
Its ok you can cry
can you smell it in the air
can you handle whats out there
Touch me, if you dare
its ok we all die
You made it look like it was my fault
but you are the one who made that last call
pull the trigger, do it, you'll only feel better
your just a stupid nigger, with blood on your sweater
So i held the gun to your face and watched you squirm
i cocked it, and listend as your stomach churned
I made you suck my barrell as you waved goodbye
And screamed with joy, as your head hit the sky
Do you have the sensation your a little bit tickeled
But as i begin my creation, now your in a pickle
Do you smile a little before your tears begin to flow
at the thought when i commit this act you won't even know
i close by saying don't say maybe
its a fact this bitch is crazy

(I'd like to clarify that I am Black, and harbor no racism - just for the hell of it)

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© 2007 Spiked Tongue
Published on Monday, February 5, 2007.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • Mylissa On Monday, February 5, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    Welcome...Wonderful write.

  • Bella Butchery On Monday, February 5, 2007, Bella Butchery (696)By person wrote:

    your name is all inspiring, welcome to dp, and i loved the brutallity, fucking amazing!

  • Spiked Tongue On Monday, February 5, 2007, Spiked Tongue (21)By person wrote:

    just to let everyone know - I am the writer of this poem, and i am black!!! that "ni**er in this poem was me, it is refering to an incident that happened to me as a child. Just for clarification!

  • Bella Butchery On Monday, February 5, 2007, Bella Butchery (696)By person wrote:

    dont sencor yourself, if people bitched, i would probably leave this web site, write on brother!

  • Aunty Depressant On Monday, February 5, 2007, Aunty Depressant (423)By person wrote:

    definitely don't censor yourself...despite my personal preference, I rather enjoyed this...A:D.(a descendant of the Celtic Redneck Crackers :P) Welcome to DP...

  • Aunty Depressant On Monday, February 5, 2007, Aunty Depressant (423)By person wrote:

    Sounds cold and brutal...I like how you threw in the sensory anomolies that relate with emotion. Not really into racial slurs personally, but like how you hit on the rut of re-living shit and not moving on.

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