Breathing in the Miles.

By Armor for your life

Every time I breathe you seem a little bit closer
So I think I'll hold my breath.

With fingers laced,
I'm falling to the ground.
Screaming to the one who has never taken my requests.

"Oh God I hope you hear me,
Say this is temporary.
I've suffered this one too many times."

I wonder,
Did you mean
All those things you said?
Even when you said you'd never change.

Though my lungs are aching now
From trying to bring you back.

I still have enough strength to say,
"Every time you run away,
I know you still have memories."


I'm still loving you.



Exhale...

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© 2007 Armor for your life
Published on Friday, February 2, 2007.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • xserratedsoulx On Friday, January 18, 2008, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    i love the desperation and immediacy in this peice.

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Tuesday, August 28, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl (253)By person wrote:

    For me, every time I breathe he seems a little bit farther away. I'm not expecting that to make much sense to you, but I can assure you that from what I've read of yours, our situations are astonishingly similar. Beautiful write.

  • Bella Butchery On Monday, February 5, 2007, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    long distance, spoken so elequintly

  • elisa On Saturday, February 3, 2007, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    wow.... i read each line...... with broken breath... ...painfully beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: im very impressed. ~ red.

  • A former member wrote: Such a great opening and ending. A poem with true meaning. I loved it.

  • Tania On Friday, February 2, 2007, Tania (197)By person wrote:

    'every time i breathe you seem a little bit closer..so i think ill hold my breath'..gorgeous write

  • A former member wrote: Very gripping work, extemely intense. A beautiful decription of such painful misery

  • A former member wrote: "I know you still have memories." Those people who are so apt to run when the world goes black and leaves them believing nothing's ever going to be okay again will always be burdened with the thoughts of what they left behind. ~*Beth*~

  • Mylissa On Friday, February 2, 2007, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    You write with such passion...so much intensity, I am speechless. Stunning write.

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