Just lying here

By Wren

We lay here in bed, holding eachother. He looks down at me, as if to ask something. Then he whispers, "We'll always be together, no matter what, Right?". I answer, "Right." and then he smiles and kisses me. He's so incredibly amazing. Almost inhuman. Some sort of robot made to be the perfect man. I've never really felt this way before about anyone. It's a little scary, I like it. For once in my life I feel completely and unconditionally LOVED. Do I tell him this? Or do I wait for him to give a sign that he feels the same way?
Too late. He knows. I can see it in his eyes as he looks at me. Those eyes. Oh, those eyes! It's like they look straight into your soul. How does he do it? How is he so perfect? No one is that perfect. There must be something I don't know. Something he's hiding from me. But what? We're always together. I know all there is to know...or do I?

Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
Copyright 2003 Wren
Published on Sunday, April 13, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Comments on "Just lying here"

Log in to post comments.
  • blackdarkness On Tuesday, April 15, 2003, blackdarkness (227)By person wrote:

    sounds like me I love this write good job

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Sunday, April 13, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (243)By person wrote:

    I like this! It keeps the reader wondering. Nice work!

Contribution Level

Wren's Favorite Poets
Wren's Favorite Works
Share/Save This Post



Join DarkPoetry Join to get a profile like this for yourself. It's quick and free.

How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [Read Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]

Attention: Darkpoetry is now in maintenance mode and will be shutting down soon. Save your work if you wish to keep it.