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the last day of the sun
By Asouldivided
slowly they bend
their small faces to the ground
their beauty fading slowly
more slowly as they bend
to the ground...
dances done so long ago
no more praying to the sun
rotting gold in dying places
turning east then turning west
one last time in the afternoon
their arms so heavy their legs so empty
the last moves in the evening dawn
it is the beginning and still the end
new space for the dying cancer
the sun sets down to higher places,
on it's last day...
one last view to the sky
then the search for pride continues
to the ground they bend...
still waiting in the darkness
if you don't believe me
then come follow me to
the field of a thousand dying suns
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© 2006 Asouldevided
Published on Sunday, August 27, 2006.
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A former member wrote:
cool, really made me think about stuff ya know
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On Sunday, August 27, 2006, BroKen-GlaSSHeArT
(69)
wrote:
this reminds me of a sunflower feild...and thats just me prolly, but i love the way you write
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A former member wrote:
loved it. especially the last stanza. i look forward to more of your works.
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On Sunday, August 27, 2006, kiss of the dark
(32) wrote:
Divine. This made me think of the last days of the world..."And when the sun fades to darkness and the moon to blood, it shall mark the end."--I never thought the Bible could be so dark...but great work, welcome to DP.
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A former member wrote:
This is a very beautiful poem. Nice write.
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On Sunday, August 27, 2006, Rebel_not_Radical
(75) wrote:
~ahh this is beautiful...i think it speaks to me in a different way...how things move on...and how they are sadly forgotten...Very cool write
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