Unfinished...

By Ghost One


As I sit here and think back I see a time of happiness and utter bliss.
Perfection comes to mind.
A time, short in it’s span, but forever burned into my memory.
Perhaps best described as the calm before the storm.
The calm being the time she held me close and brought me peace and strength.
The storm being the aftermath of her departure from my arms.
An entire month of torment.
Seems like an eternity inside a day.
Pain as fresh as the first hour, and emotions as old as my bones.
Has it really been 4 weeks?
Time blurs into a pool of emotions, memories, and words.
Will it ever end?
Only the blur of time will ever tell…

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© 2006 Ghost One
Published on Tuesday, July 18, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mahakala On Tuesday, July 18, 2006, Mahakala (209)By person wrote:

    *slaps self* damn it... *is gettin all emotional again* great write... yet when i read your work they bring up a lot of memories... sad... painful... the scars are ripping open again... i dont think i would have it any other way...

  • A former member wrote: And you thought you had no talent as a writer, such notions are bantha fodder! I love you Jeremy. Welcome to DP.

  • A former member wrote: This was crushing to watch unfold.. just crushing. Well penned.

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