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I cant..i just cant
By Broken_Wings12
I cant let this take me.
I wont let you be the one to save me.
And why cant anyone else see?
That i dont need..reality.
Swollen and sedated ill keep running
Ill keep the pain from coming
Ill keep running
Away from the hate, that no drugs could sedate
The pavement does my blood annoint
Ill keep running to a certain point
Im gone and im never coming home
Im free to see and free to roam.
I cant let this kill me i wont let it
Cant you see..cant you..i dont frown
Its not true...not all of us fall down.
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© 2006 Broken_Wings12
Published on Wednesday, July 12, 2006.
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"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, September 29, 2009, CjPsychotic
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wrote:
I appreciate the self-heroism in the poem but isn't the fact you say you'll be nomadic and keep running contradictory to saying you'll only run to a certain point? To me, I like the skeleton of this poem, but I think you could expand it, and make your reciprication of ideas throughout the poem stick out that much more.
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