Life

By Lythodaemil

Life hurts so many ways,
Love the hardest pain of all,
when you lose it you lose part of yourself.

Tossed into the abyss part of your soul is gone,
never to return,
your feelings now dead to the world.

A zombie you become,
and shall you never return,
to your full potential hereafter.

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© 2006 The Unwanted One
Published on Friday, June 9, 2006.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: An advise: there's a difference between "love" and "clinging on someone because there's no one else". Having learned to understand this difference you'll become a "wanted one", I am sure.

  • dp_whipping_girl On Friday, June 9, 2006, dp_whipping_girl (234)By person wrote:

    painful wisdom; that difference took me nearly 30 years to begin to fathom and i'm still learning to discern between the two

  • Wolk On Friday, June 9, 2006, Wolk (54)By person wrote:

    ok. Thanks to you i am quitting internet for good.

  • Thorn On Friday, June 9, 2006, Thorn (282)By person wrote:

    Stunning... I know it is hard to believe, but there IS such thing as life after love. You will find it. I am sure.

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