Winter Kept Us Warm

By Irioth

winter kept us warm
as we walked
surreal through the streets
never our dream
but those of others
as we waited for spring
forgetting
cold songs around us
warm faces
can never possibly compare to our cold
the cold kept us apart
just as it brought us together

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© 2006 Irioth
Published on Thursday, May 25, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • stormtalk On Saturday, March 31, 2007, stormtalk (727)By person wrote:

    Very nicely done; I look forward to more.

  • Nail Bunny On Tuesday, May 30, 2006, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    That's deep... and fabulous... alright, Lord Stark, I'm expecting more of these more often now.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Thursday, May 25, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    Could have been many things... Nice write

  • A former member wrote: Solemn, aches my heart in the most forbidden fashion. I know this. The bitter ways of winter. Its despair, its overwhelming beauty that seems.. almost deceptive. Thank you for this.

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