Once again I HATE

By icebat

The other night we were together,
I stayed until late.
You said you cared for me,
I thought it was fate.
I left you some messages,
Now I sit and wait.
The days pass with no response,
No chance for a date.
You had chased away the darkness,
Now once again I HATE.

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© 2006 icebat
Published on Tuesday, May 9, 2006.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • mywristshurt On Thursday, July 13, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    it rhymed very well and the message is quite clear.. dont trust anyone that you just met.. i very much so liked it

  • Dissolving Poet On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560)By person wrote:

    Wow this was just abusive to my mind it kept beating it with these words, the torture the torment you have to go through it was just heartshattering.

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