Dreamland

By Ozymandias

I sit here and force these words onto paper,

Yeht yrt ot tsiser yb gniraeppa sdrawkcab.

My perspective of reality has been changing,

This world lacks the beauty I once saw.

I see the flaws of humanity,

But I alone am helpless to mend our kind.

The worlds inside my mind seem so real,

Who is to say they’re not?

A distorted dimension of surrealism inside my head,

Fabricated from one too many lonely nights,

That fall short of the medically recommended amount of sleep.

One of these days,

My mind will escape from it’s container.

No longer bound by the tenacious gravity,

It will float away from this ruin.

And when I am gone,

I will be free to live peacefully in my dreamland.

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© 2006 Ozymandias726
Published on Monday, May 8, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: You have a voice that is soft, yet insistent. Liquid smooth write. Beautifully done.

  • A former member wrote: I've noticed a repeating theme in your writing... But I don't have to tell you what that is. Nice work. ~Lost

  • ShardsofSilence On Tuesday, May 30, 2006, ShardsofSilence (222)By person wrote:

    Sincere. Soft. and lucid. Your way with words is astounding

  • mywristshurt On Thursday, May 11, 2006, mywristshurt (408)By person wrote:

    oh yeah.. what a way to put your words on how people are so unperfect..

  • PassionateDarkDesire On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, PassionateDarkDesire (28)By person wrote:

    truly...tuely....I say this....you are an INCEDIBLE writer!

  • Dissolving Poet On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    Wow tis was just incredible, you did an awesome job*Breathes*

  • A former member wrote: wow...this is a near description of my dreamland, which i call my "Happy Place"...your views are much like mine, and mine are much like yours. terrific

  • A former member wrote: I really love the backward line...it is so true...

  • A former member wrote: i liked the ending, very hopeful...gave it the touch it needed, eventhough i do think one person can make a difference, good job ~Tamara

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