Drown
By Eladrim
Live, for the life I gave up
And destroy these memories.
Until the rise beyond the fall.
Until the end of it all.
Until the Moon and Sun
Bleed as one.
When the sky burns red,
And melts into the Sea.
Until all that has been
And all that would be
Is torn away,
And time itself is undone.
Then you will find me
Weeping in the dark.
The same flame that consumed me then
Will not have drowned in the ocean that night
Like my body did.
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© 2006 Eladrim
Published on Sunday, February 12, 2006.
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A former member wrote:
Marvelous imagery in this piece, and like the others said, teeming with despair... Seemed to have a bitterness to it as well. Nice write :)
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On Monday, March 6, 2006, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
despair has a voice.......it speaks here............well done...........urban
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On Monday, February 13, 2006, BlackBear
(12) wrote:
Shocking loneliness!, I loved this, and cannot explain why. - Michael
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A former member wrote:
I Like It Nice...