Muddy Knees and Ex Boyfriends

By spaniellie


Warm vodka creates a quibble laugh
Blurred atmosphere transfixed on this wrath
Rubbing alcohol boiled
Into sharp revenge
Hateful prostitutes crowd
The need to avenge

A twitch gone blind
Conformed in sheets
Toes curl
A rhyme, swallowed to keep

Urine stained friction
Remains tan
The spongy love
Unnoticed man

Im angry
Unclean
Im angry
And green

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© 2005 spaniellie
Published on Tuesday, December 20, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Saschwann On Wednesday, February 15, 2006, Saschwann (13)By person wrote:

    Splendid! I find myself comimg back to this poem and reading it again and again. Somehow it just makes me miss you more. YOu are genious epitomised.

  • Graveyard_Desciple On Tuesday, December 20, 2005, Graveyard_Desciple (39)By person wrote:

    wow. the flow was amazing, great write the feelings meant to portray come across very clearly

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