tiny

By The_Lady_in_the_Fire


i feel
tiny
your yelling makes me feel
tiny

you take it out on me
and i feel small
your barrading and comments
and i just want to curl up

into a tiny
little ball
and dissapear
go away

my heart aches
youre supposed to be my rock
but i feel im between
a rock and a hard place

please dont be mad at me
i dont know what ive done
wha infraction ive made
to make you so mad

but I take it
for fear
of being alone
you leaving me

so i take feeling tiny
in hopes
that when youre happy again
youll make me whole

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© 2005 The_Lady_in_the_Fire
Published on Saturday, December 17, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i hate yelling...i like how you caught the moment...but i feel...i hate yelling

  • Omalleyjr On Monday, December 19, 2005, Omalleyjr (22)By person wrote:

    this sertanly captures the moment well done once again ~the alley cat

  • A former member wrote: this poem was powerful..i like how the imgages were conveyed of being small. it's sad, when a person can make you feel like shrinking into a tiny ball, and you have captured that perfectly, here. very heartfelt. ~bethany

  • Lady Grinning Soul On Saturday, December 17, 2005, Lady Grinning Soul (145)By person wrote:

    nice write

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