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Where Eye And Sky Collide
By island warrior
Lost in your eyes
So blue are your skies
Sparkling with sunshine
And hidden surprise
I want to be inside
To see your sunrise
To find the rays of gold
Buried in your mind
To see your day unfold
And the treasures you find
Drifting through your garden
Many colours combine
I enter a corridor
My spirit is awoken
It's bright and alive
Windows wide open
But some remain closed
Labelled unspoken
I'm keen to see more
But the moment has ended
Though I yearn to explore
It can't be extended
I'm in a state of awe
Then back to myself again
So I thankyou for the journey
A chance to see the other side
Diving like a dolphin
Into the hoop of your eye
Breaking through on the horizon
Where water meets sky
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Copyright 2005 island warrior
Published on Friday, August 19, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Where Eye And Sky Collide"
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A former member wrote:
wow....amazing imagery... "diving like a dolphin into the hoop of your eye" ...LOVED IT!
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A former member wrote:
Yes it is beautiful, something heavenly.
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On Sunday, August 21, 2005, AniDayz
(820)
wrote:
ahhh...this is most beautiful...elegant and encompassing [my] eyes.heart...in such serenity---just remarkable...like actually *tasting* the sunrise on this tongue of mine....
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On Friday, August 19, 2005, Sin
(1168) wrote:
you are lovely and this was beautiful :)
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A former member wrote:
awesome flow, love the rhyme scheme......really like the last stanza and the last line is perfect.....thank you
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A former member wrote:
This was lovely. Thank you for the journey.
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On Friday, August 19, 2005, elisa
(1616) wrote:
some journeys never end.....especially ones as beautiful as this...
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