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bleach blue skyline.
By WhoIAM
rain.
a somber reminder of continuity.
it started to rain and we sat in the dark listening to it.
the lightning could barley be heard. it was far off.
high or aside,
it is hard to tell.
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Copyright 2005 WhoIAM
Published on Monday, August 1, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, October 27, 2007, Mari
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wrote:
mhm.
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On Sunday, September 2, 2007, MESUN
(230) wrote:
i don't know why, but robert frost entered my mind. i don't like robert frost. to each there own though, and you seem to have done well for yourself according to these others. keep doing what works for you.
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A former member wrote:
..how you are subtle and obvious at the same time befuddles me..you have a nice balance..never plain. I find myself coming back to your profile..to regain posture. That wasn't quite the point of this write, but..I find your words puts me at ease.
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A former member wrote:
You create the boundaries and leave the rest to me..thank you. ~ June
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On Tuesday, August 2, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
damn! you never fail to impress me, great write! great! ~b
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On Tuesday, August 2, 2005, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
" welcome to my atmosphere" ... funny how the first thought would be this was just a gentle moment you spent with a special someone ( probably curvy ) but it sure changes drastically if read as some kids locked in a basement ( probably hungry ) ....
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On Tuesday, August 2, 2005, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
this gave itself away ... dug it ... funguy
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On Tuesday, August 2, 2005, Possesion
(137) wrote:
Short. Simple. Vivid.
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A former member wrote:
short- but I'm able to get the imagery in my mind.
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