A Love Without Goodbyes
By peril_notion
A lifetime filled with cheating hearts
all echo from my past
The "promise true's" and "I love you's"
each one meant to last
So fine was this line of sharing
built with honesty and trust
Each vow's now left inside my head
to slowly gather dust
I struggle to tomorrow
searching hope, yet walking blind
While broken dreams and silent screams
play re-runs in my mind
I try to shake each past mistake
and meet what lies ahead
While hearing cold reminders of
these promises once said
It's hard to feel what's wrong from real
when shadows dim the light
I close my eyes and dream a dream
of heaven every night
It's all I know, this history
I hold a guiding hand?
These scars I show, a lesson that
I don't yet understand?
Another day awaits me
in this life I call my own
A cruel delay frustrates me
as I face this world alone
Let words once said and tears long shed
rest peaceful in this heart
I know the pain of love in vain
will always play its part
With open arms I welcome such
new dreams as may arise
I only pray to find one day
a love... without goodbyes
Comments on "A Love Without Goodbyes"
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A former member wrote:
great write it says alot and true I like it
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On Friday, August 19, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
i agree with Ian, the flow was like silk...and the message was shattering..i think almost everyone can relate to this write ...i cant believe it doesnt have more comments...nicely done ~kristy
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On Thursday, July 28, 2005, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
Very painful... in general, I'm not a big fan of rhyme, but you pull it off well - just about all the lines flow smoothly. Nice write.
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A former member wrote:
bloody good flow......and I read the whole thing which means it must be good because with most love poems i can't get past the first two lines
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A former member wrote:
absolutely superb. Each and every stanza is magnificent in and of itself. The rhythm is practically flawless! I believe that continuing my rant here would be to marr what you've said here. (The last stanza is like a bucket of frozen acid in the face)