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our story
By Just a Rose
Our story is one of passion
Oceans could not extinguish
Love that only grows stronger
With every letter, every word
my heart grows fonder
With every kiss blown to the stars
Desperately searching
For its beloved’s lips
The fates said our future was gone
Every day that passes,
We prove them wrong
I know for yet another chapter
We cannot be together
And even though it devastates me
Not to feel your touch
I will give up these days
Rather than sacrifice forever
These pages my not be as full of each other
As we would like them to be
But darling our ending
Will be happily ever after
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Copyright 2005 Just a Rose
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On Sunday, October 2, 2005, Army Barbie
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wrote:
Man oh man do I ever relate to this. How is it you could possibly sum this up so well. You made me tear up a little...beauitul
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On Friday, September 2, 2005, glasshouse
(548) wrote:
"The fates said our future was gone Every day that passes, We prove them wrong"Beautiful and eloquent. Nicely worded. -Glass
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A former member wrote:
"With every kiss blown to the stars
Desperately searching
For its beloved’s lips" -- i fell in love with that stanza. its ... perfection, if im allowed to say that. amazing job.
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On Thursday, July 21, 2005, redtearswhitesnow
(79) wrote:
Ditto what Evil Redemption said.That Stanza is F'in Amazing.I've read it 5 times and still cannot Turn my eyes from it.
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