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breathe
By Just a Rose
you call me your own
saying you love me so...
if this is your love
I dont want it
all your comments cut like knives
never healing nor comforting words
they strangle me
I grasp for air
as long as you have your hold on me
I cannot breath
I will never taste a sweet breath
because whether I like it or not
im yours...
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Copyright 2005 Just a Rose
Published on Monday, June 27, 2005.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
i like this its really really good
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A former member wrote:
this is painful, love. like the tip of a knife to my jugular. it's strange that what you don't say, you write, and what you write, you cannot say. right? this was awesome.
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On Tuesday, June 28, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
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wrote:
I like the message in this one. I can definately relate. Nice piece. :-D ~Sara
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A former member wrote:
that was a great write i loved it
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