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My Broken Fantasy
By peril_notion
Why are we commited
To doing what we're told?
Adhere to all else's
Society-based molds?
Everyone has accusations
Always seem to condemn me
But not one of them realizes
Or holds my sincere belief
Holding onto my dear ones
That shield me from this hell
I lived inside my own young fantasy
Until the truth caused it to fail
Knowing the intolerable cruelty
Adds the world's weight to me
I grasp desperatley for a helping hand
But all others have seemed to flee
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Copyright 2005 Heather K. Burnett
Comments on "My Broken Fantasy"
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A former member wrote:
such a brutal realization, like being raped of innocence and left to die in the cold rain. Even consumed in a crowd of people, we're completely alone. great write
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A former member wrote:
fantasys inside fantasys inside fantasys.......
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On Monday, June 27, 2005, Elise
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wrote:
Very well written. Such helplessness, to lokk around and find noone there to help.
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