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Your Eyes
By Just a Rose
Looking into your eyes
I see everything that I want
Nothings wrong and nothings right
The whole world stops
We couldn’t care less what happens
It only matters that this moment lasts forever
I touch your lips and kiss your eyes
I know that only you can save me from myself
The question…
Can I save you from yourself?
We are both on the same path to self-destruction
Yes when I look into your eyes I can see your love
But there is fear as well
You are still looking for more?
I want to be able to bring the light to your life
The one that you brought to mine
I know that only a few words can ruin this moment
They will take you away
The thought that ruins this moment
We were meant for each other
But fate can only go so far
I want to fill all your voids but you have to let me
Don’t let this haunt me anymore
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Copyright 2005 Just a Rose
Published on Sunday, June 26, 2005.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Your Eyes"
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A former member wrote:
Well I find this poem better than some of the work from when I first started writing. But yet I still have been to lazy to put some of my own work on here even though I have won my share of contests. I still think that you are a skilled writer..
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On Wednesday, June 29, 2005, Thorn
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wrote:
Beautiful. I love this write.
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A former member wrote:
don't worry...youre a really good writer- summer
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On Tuesday, June 28, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_
(69) wrote:
the last stanza was brilliant!!
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A former member wrote:
I love this write it says so much! Great write!!
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A former member wrote:
this write truly is amazing
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A former member wrote:
I'm glad you polished this up. You're better than you know.. I know you're amazing. Keep it up, doll. Welcome to DP.
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