im sorry

By etarnally damnd

im sorry...

im sorry that u where hurt.

that i could not stop it from happing.

though u say there is nothing i could of done.

it still changes nothing no matter how sorry i am.

this sad fact i know and will never forget.

i never wanted u to feel pain because of me.

that is what i thought the first time we where true to our feelings.

and though i know i did not cause this pain im still sorry u had to feel it and would gladly change places if i could.

but i can't so i will do what i can to try to num the pain.

without numing the love i send. in the end there is notting i can do to stop u from ever feeling pain this is what i am truly sorry for. for the fact that i carry so much pain inside but still can't baer ur pain for u.

so i am sorry.

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Copyright 2005 DarkNLonelyNomad
Published on Thursday, April 28, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • The Crimson Queen On Friday, April 29, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    yea, as tarty said the spelling errors need to be fixed, other then that, this is pritty good

  • LovelyAssassinx On Thursday, April 28, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (151)By person wrote:

    this is really good. nice write. ~Unlucky

  • Kinkypoptart On Thursday, April 28, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    watch typos and spelling errors... other than that, great write ~*~Tart~*~

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