So alone

By Shaded Angel

So many thoughts inside my head,
So many opinions that need to be said,
But nobody's ever there when I need them,
And nobody ever shows me any respect.

Sometimes I wonder if I'll ever be loved,
Wonder why my soul cannot be saved,
Why everyone leaves when I tie my shoes,
Everyone keeps playing with my emotions.

I'm tired of being the angel who's
Covered with darkness and helps people through
Their darkest days with loyalty
But cries in the lack of light.

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Copyright 2005 Shaded Angel
Published on Wednesday, April 13, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • the dried flower On Saturday, August 5, 2006, the dried flower (67)By person wrote:

    i like it!......"why every one leaves when i tie my shoes" i really like the way you were expressing what you were feeling with this line....

  • A former member wrote: You're really talented...im kind of overtaken with emotions relating to this one. Well written.

  • A former member wrote: I like this poem and I agree with fallen.

  • Serenity On Wednesday, April 13, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    :) Great write

  • Kinkypoptart On Wednesday, April 13, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Wonderfully written. I enjoyed this poem, and fallen is right. -Tart-

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