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if you could only see your self the way i see you...
By etarnally damnd
why must you listen to the lies told by your mirror?
do you really feel that way about your self?
under the smile you show so openly.
is it so hard to see what i see?
do i have some super power i don't know about?
what else could it be?
why else do you refuse to see your self as i do?
i can't be the only one who see's it i'm i?
if you could only see your self the way i see you.
there would be no more talk of the beauty you don't see and more of the
beauty you do see so clearly.
if you could only see your self the way i see you.
if you would only try you would find it is not hard to see?
does the mirror really effect you that much?
the mirror of lies.
if so you need only ask and i would split it into a million shards just
so you could have a true glimpse of your true beauty.
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Copyright 2005 DarkNLonelyNomad
Published on Monday, April 4, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "if you could only see your self the way i see you..."
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On Sunday, June 12, 2005, Serenity
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wrote:
I cannot begin to express how this made me feel. Or how touching and beautiful it is.
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On Monday, June 13, 2005, etarnally damnd
(61) wrote:
thanks im glad u liked it.
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A former member wrote:
dude I know this might be about my sis mike but its good and I can see where you`re coming from. The girl I write about thinks low of herself but she is beautiful and she dosn`t see it ether.
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On Sunday, June 12, 2005, etarnally damnd
(61) wrote:
yeah man it is about ur sis. and its freakn crazy isn't it. i mean its so obvious but they wont except it.-michael
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On Sunday, June 12, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
...gosh...
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A former member wrote:
beautiful, I've felt like this before, I've also been on the other side, busy believing the mirror's lies
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On Wednesday, April 13, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
i agree with TheUnluckyOne, our own imperfections are seen more clearly to us then others...well done on this piece
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