We talk

By Shaded Angel

Come out of that darkness and see the rainbows
Get rid of that stench and smell the roses
Leave everyone who has left you there so long ago
And care for those who care for you now.

Tell me what bothers you, love.
I need to know everything you know.
Say what doesn't need saying
I have to hear what you have heard.
Show me whatever you have experienced.
I want to see what you have seen.
Darling, you're silence is torture
Please love me back as I love you.

I beg of you, don't leave me,
Don't leave this life.
Their hatered is'n worth dying for
Just hate them back and never care...

...he always tells me.

Come into the darkness and leave those rainbows
Smell the stench and get rid of those roses
Leave everyone who has left you there so long ago
And care for those who care for you now.

Don't tell me what bothers you, love.
I already know everything you know.
Don't say what doesn't need saying
I know everything you are thinking.
Don't show me anything you've experienced.
I've always been there behind you.
Darling, you're silence is so sweet
Please love me back as I love you.

I beg of you to join me,
Let's leave this life.
Their hatered isn't worth dealing with
Let's show them, we hate them back

...I always tell him.

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Copyright 2005 Shaded Angel
Published on Tuesday, March 29, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: *applaudes* very good another great write congrats

  • DarkSoul On Sunday, April 3, 2005, DarkSoul (19)By person wrote:

    "Their hatered is'n worth dealing with Let's show them, we hate them back " I like many people can relate. Another victory for Shaded Angel ~DarkSoul

  • A former member wrote: again, another great write... You explain your feelings so clearly, without all the fancy scenes or words... Just the way it is, loud and clear... Love it...

  • Elise On Tuesday, March 29, 2005, Elise (188)By person wrote:

    Wow it worked out pefectly. It would make great lyrics, awesome write ^_^

  • Saint_Reaper On Thursday, March 31, 2005, Saint_Reaper (203)By person wrote:

    i was thinking the same, awesome write... i belive it would work as lyrics...nice

  • Gideon Lost On Tuesday, March 29, 2005, Gideon Lost (138)By person wrote:

    How very intense. Rainbows in the darkness are like promises in the darkness . . .

  • happilydepressed On Tuesday, March 29, 2005, happilydepressed (409)By person wrote:

    awesome write

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