Every time

By Shaded Angel

I haven't felt lonely in a while
Because every time I was down
You were around,
And I was wearing your crown.

I haven't felt lovesick in a while
Because every time I felt lost
You were around,
No matter the cost.

I haven't felt wanted in a while
Because every time you were near
You left me alone
Ignoring my tears.

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Copyright 2005 Shaded Angel
Published on Tuesday, March 29, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: yeah i agre with halfdarkangel

  • HalfDarkAngel On Wednesday, November 8, 2006, HalfDarkAngel (59)By person wrote:

    whoa. so few words, yet so much was said

  • A former member wrote: wow I don't say this very much but I loved it.

  • DarkSoul On Sunday, April 3, 2005, DarkSoul (19)By person wrote:

    Welcome, my dear, to DP, and my favs list. This is such a beautiful write~DarkSoul

  • A former member wrote: this is really good.. I agree short but powerfull... Flows nicely :)

  • A former member wrote: wow this is cool ~~GAP~~

  • Saint_Reaper On Thursday, March 31, 2005, Saint_Reaper (200)By person wrote:

    ooooh i like it, short yet powerful....emotions make the best writeing tool...i like

  • island warrior On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, island warrior (210)By person wrote:

    Very well put. Nice write.

  • Elise On Tuesday, March 29, 2005, Elise (187)By person wrote:

    Heartbreaking, yet beautiful. Written wonderfully..you captured a hard to capture feeling. Welcome to DP I hope you stay a while ^_^

  • Gideon Lost On Tuesday, March 29, 2005, Gideon Lost (137)By person wrote:

    Eloquently put. Simple. Good write.

  • The Crimson Queen On Tuesday, March 29, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    beautiful, i like this..keep it up..and Welcome to DP

  • happilydepressed On Tuesday, March 29, 2005, happilydepressed (400)By person wrote:

    painfully beautiful

  • A former member wrote: OMG!! I love this!! Absolutely soopa-doopa amazing work!!!!!!!!!! It's beautiful. ~WithoutWords~

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