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Every time
By Shaded Angel
I haven't felt lonely in a while
Because every time I was down
You were around,
And I was wearing your crown.
I haven't felt lovesick in a while
Because every time I felt lost
You were around,
No matter the cost.
I haven't felt wanted in a while
Because every time you were near
You left me alone
Ignoring my tears.
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Copyright 2005 Shaded Angel
Published on Tuesday, March 29, 2005.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
yeah i agre with halfdarkangel
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On Wednesday, November 8, 2006, HalfDarkAngel
(59)
wrote:
whoa. so few words, yet so much was said
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A former member wrote:
wow I don't say this very much but I loved it.
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On Sunday, April 3, 2005, DarkSoul
(19) wrote:
Welcome, my dear, to DP, and my favs list. This is such a beautiful write~DarkSoul
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A former member wrote:
this is really good.. I agree short but powerfull... Flows nicely :)
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A former member wrote:
wow this is cool ~~GAP~~
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On Thursday, March 31, 2005, Saint_Reaper
(203) wrote:
ooooh i like it, short yet powerful....emotions make the best writeing tool...i like
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On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, island warrior
(210) wrote:
Very well put. Nice write.
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On Tuesday, March 29, 2005, Elise
(188) wrote:
Heartbreaking, yet beautiful. Written wonderfully..you captured a hard to capture feeling. Welcome to DP I hope you stay a while ^_^
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On Tuesday, March 29, 2005, Gideon Lost
(138) wrote:
Eloquently put. Simple. Good write.
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On Tuesday, March 29, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
beautiful, i like this..keep it up..and Welcome to DP
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On Tuesday, March 29, 2005, happilydepressed
(409) wrote:
painfully beautiful
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A former member wrote:
OMG!! I love this!! Absolutely soopa-doopa amazing work!!!!!!!!!! It's beautiful. ~WithoutWords~
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