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By darkleprechaun
i wish i could be hers... or she be mine... or even better yet...
i wish we could just be eachothers. though i know this never to be still
i wish for it to be just her and me.
silly i know but that's how i am,
hoping one day to be a man, find a woman,who can put up with me and maybe,
just maybe find a little bit of happiness
if i could i'd make a list of what and why it should be her, but for the
life me i couldn't say.
she awakens things in me that have slept for too long and puts to rest
all the things i've been trying
to for so damn long with just a smile... i fool i am and this i admit,
but i don't want forever... no just a bit... some
time to see how it goes... cause until it's tried no one knows... but as
all in life it is not simple, but very
complicated, especially for two as jaded as we.
Comments on "***"
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On Sunday, April 24, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
Great write, very deep and filled to the brim with amazing emotional expression. I love it. ~*~Tart~*~
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On Thursday, March 24, 2005, Cinn
(152) wrote:
I like this, it's really personal, a deep desire. Can't wait to see what's next. -Cinn
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A former member wrote:
You have inspired me, thank you. It's all too hard to find things to keep the spirit and mind going. Wonder what keeps yours going?
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A former member wrote:
Everyone has someone, u'll find her soon...wonderful piece *best of luck*
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On Wednesday, March 23, 2005, A Broken Soul
(80) wrote:
that's EXACTLY what i want, except i want a man... but lately i can relate cuz i feel incapable of being with anybody else. very cool write ^autumn^
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On Wednesday, March 23, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(309) wrote:
it'll come true..i wish you the best..and its not silly or anything like that..believe and work towards it, and it'll come true -Kel
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On Wednesday, March 23, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
its a beautiful dream...and sometimes all we have are dreams...so dream and dream well
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On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, darkleprechaun
(56) wrote:
thanx sinfully... and well put as well you are all very kind and i hope you the best in all you endevors