Conversations with Death / Heaven or Hell

By avlar

I had fulfilled my duty.
My time had come.
It was time for my conversation.
My conversation with Death.

As I walk
down the lonely road of mortality,
I finaly reach Him.

As we walk,
He wants to converse,
He asks me a question,
In one quick verse.

He asks me it clearly.
"Why is it people hate me so?"
I have to answer,
so I tell him what I know.

"People only hate,
what they cannot see.
That is why,
people hate thee."

He looks at me,
I pray He accepts.
For this was my answer,
It is all that He gets.

He was deep in thought,
it worried me so.
For accepting my answer
is the only way I go.

He then says,
"People love god,
yet cannot see,
so yet I missunderstand,
why people hate me."

So I relpy,
"God creates life,
you take it away.
It is your job,
it ws made to be this way."

He then looks at me,
and asks one final question.
"Why is it, if it as you say to me,
Then why is it,
You are not scared of me."

This question startled me.
I was quite for a while.
I knew I had to answer,
but had to think for a while.

"There is no reason,
for me to be scared.
I know I must die,
and cannot avoid thee."

He then stops.
I wait for an answer
He looks at me
and finaly replies.

"You may pass,
for you have taught me something today.
You have taught me to keep,
the feelings at bay."

So I may live,
for another lifetime.

I have pleased Death today.
I have finaly won,
but He will return,
and want His pay.

Heaven or Hell

my weight keeps on changing
i don't know why
i keep moving
up into the sky

first i feel heavy
all laden with blood
the i feel light
when running blood
finaly comes to a stop

now i feel weightless
i feel like i'm floating
floating above the clouds

i've had many problems
but not like this one
i am confused
where is every one...

i was always told there was a god
but now i am dead
and i'm all alone

but then i wonder
is this what it is like?
is this the meaning of death?
to be alone?

i wish i could see someone.

now i wonder
is this my punishment?
but as it starts to sink in
i feel a great rush

now i am heavy
i don't know why
i feel like i've fallen
fallen from the sky.

i am all alone
exept for a dull light
it is coming from ahead
so i journey on
and something finaly sinks in.....

i am all alone now......


i will now combine 2 poems together so i can post more please specify
which one u r comenting on

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Copyright 2005 avlar
Published on Monday, March 21, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Soulfire On Wednesday, March 23, 2005, Soulfire (97)By person wrote:

    LOVE IT. LOVE IT. LOVE IT. It flows like smooth, warm honey!

  • BleedSilver On Monday, March 21, 2005, BleedSilver (298)By person wrote:

    I really enjoyed this piece very much. There were just a couple of spelling errors, and the periods and commas really break up the flow. But otherwise, this piece just kicks ass!

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