in response to

By MyScarsStillBleed

I never promised you anything
i never said I'd wait

I couldn't give you anything
no pledge of undieing devotion



I never promised I would be here
You filled me with the lies

I told you I could love you
but you left me here to die



Now you return my affection

what do you want from me?

I'll give you everything I promised
but I never promised you anything





I mean no offense HRH, just my original confused reaction.

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Copyright 2005 MyScarsStillBleed
Published on Tuesday, March 8, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Bluegirl On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    I love this. It sounds both bitter, and sullen to me. Keep it up! :)

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