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Low
By WhoIAM
come out with me tonight
we will go see a bad movie
in a near empty theatre
we will sit towards the back
and joke in hushed voices
we will write notes in my notebook to the clean up crew,
and leave them on the seats
and buy a ridiculously large drink and put
a pint of something in it.
sure.
we are feeling low
but lets forget.
laugh.
the screen will be hard to pay attention to
but we will at times.
lets get lost, dammit.
come out with me tonight. laugh.
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Copyright 2005 WhoIAM
Published on Saturday, March 5, 2005.
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On Tuesday, October 30, 2007, Mari
(425)
wrote:
"let's get lost dammit." ridiculously well worded. how demanding, almost like a little kid. it's got a nice longing for innocence here, one that most people can relate to, i'm sure.
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On Saturday, March 5, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
:) yes, we all need an escape once in a while, curiously written, much enjoyed. ~b
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On Saturday, March 5, 2005, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
a moment within manny........remembered.....well spoken.....well done......urban
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