- Do It -

By TheMadPoet

wat the fuk r u waitn' 4..juz pull it ......
Fully loaded gun...right at ya temple, juz do it ...

you'll feel much better when dead and gone, rather than sittn here ... worring, caring, not letting go and still not moving on...

wat the fuk r u waitn' 4..juz pull it ......
Fully loaded gun...right at ya temple, juz do it ...

wont help them see, how much they really mean... or well ur gone now i gues itz reall meant ....All time spent, would you say wasted.. as the tears ran down your face and you tasted, the pain as it flowed never hearing "YES" but alwayz constant "NO's"....

wat the fuk r u waitn' 4..juz pull it ......
Fully loaded gun...right at ya temple, juz do it ...

They wont miss you even though they are the ones who put you throught it .... Could blame youeself .... alwayz for the wrong ones you chose to care.... maybe after all you are no better .. those who cared get close you wouldnt let em'.... your hearts turned black...your eyez see through...hand on the trigger ... ONE pull and the bullet still wouldnt be a lethal .. as the pain they've injected on you .. shyt they've put you through .... you'd be a lot better off ...

So Juz Pull The Trigger..... Itz wat u must do ....

~X~X~X~ FareWell ~X~X~X~

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Copyright 2005 TheMadPoet
Published on Thursday, March 3, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Ladyhawke On Wednesday, September 22, 2010, Ladyhawke (394)By person wrote:

    Wow. Intense feeling here. I can totally relate to the feeling tho. Liked it alot. Write MORE!!!

  • A former member wrote: I agree with the general consensus. The Piece is powerful, would make a good song. Still, I hope you find Peace without the aid of a bullet.

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, March 3, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    interesting...

  • A former member wrote: powerful peice! Good write!

  • DoctorAsh On Thursday, March 3, 2005, DoctorAsh (373)By person wrote:

    Theres a-lot-o grammer fuck-ups in this, makes 1 not want to read it all the way -------> through ... because its annoying - good effort

  • elisa On Thursday, March 3, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    taunting the suicidals...? .....*shakes head*.....i bet you tease the animals at the zoo too.....j/k;) elisa

  • Empathy On Thursday, March 3, 2005, Empathy (22)By person wrote:

    hmmm... eh fuck it.

  • A former member wrote: What the fuck.

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