Invisible Scars

By PointlessX

you wouldnt be able to notice
unless you looked profound
on the outside everything is ordinary
but the truth lies underground.

she does well to keep it buried
and continues on each day
withholding the pain that is inside
which has never gone away.

she has perfected this game of charades
she can not afford her cover blown
though underneath the surface
the depth of her tragety unknown.

her wounds are unseen
although she reaches for the stars
she remains bleeding
from her invisble scars.

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Copyright 2005 PointlessX
Published on Friday, February 18, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Wow, this poem is beautiful, and It explains exactly how I feel... Really well written...

  • K_Love On Friday, February 18, 2005, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Your poetry always found a way to impact me in so many ways. This was wonderful, glad to see a new post from you. Incredible and perfected words.

  • HaUnTed_sOuL On Friday, February 18, 2005, HaUnTed_sOuL (18)By person wrote:

    love the raw emotion great write

  • DarkDruidess On Friday, February 18, 2005, DarkDruidess (313)By person wrote:

    excellent portrayal of emotion here...one that I know well

  • CrOsSeD N BoUnD On Friday, February 18, 2005, CrOsSeD N BoUnD (45)By person wrote:

    what they said..... sorry, but im a little out of it today. so yeah.. but great write... RoArKe~

  • A former member wrote: Great poem. You pack so much power in it

  • The Crimson Queen On Friday, February 18, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    i know how this is..nice write. . .it flows very nicely..i loved it!

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