Loving You

By Psyko

Here is another poem i want to share with you written to me by my girl. It's damn good too!


Putting my feelings into words....
Impossible
for my feelings for you....
Incomprehensible
If I could let you see the effect you have on me,
you would be blinded
shadows would be no morefor I am in love, with you,
and only you for a fact
more in love then I have ever felt
I love you, is all I can say
but my heart says morethere is so much more to my love,
Dreams, Hopes, Fantasies
that I all hope one day will turn into
realities
when im with you,
I am a new me
a me that should not leave
and in these few words,
I hope you can see
how much you mean to me
In life, and in love
I just want you to hear it
I LOVE YOU!!

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Copyright 2005 Holly Carman
Published on Tuesday, January 25, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Psyko On Friday, January 28, 2005, Psyko (25)By person wrote:

    No Matt!! Nobody wants to see that!!LOL ~Nick~

  • Whisper On Thursday, January 27, 2005, Whisper (112)By person wrote:

    Put on the pic of her in her school girl outfit. ~Matt~

  • A former member wrote: How sweet.. - Holly

  • Psyko On Wednesday, January 26, 2005, Psyko (25)By person wrote:

    She writes amazing poetry. i told her she should try DP but she said nah. oh well! ~Nick~

  • A former member wrote: Man....I wish my guy wrote poems....Awesome read! Tell her Penn says so.

  • A former member wrote: Good poem

  • The Crimson Queen On Tuesday, January 25, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    awwwww.....very sweet poem...left me thinking of my own heart's desire..

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