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Downward Spiral
By HiImFromJupiter
I've smoked crack many times before
fell flat on my back and still wanted more
I don't know why I am this way
"Just quit" yeah I'll try, but not today
The dope must be filling some hole inside me
but I am unwilling I don't want to see
This cyce keeps spinning round and round
my wear and tear showing I'm losing ground
But still I refuse to acknowledge the fact
This battle I'll lose if I don't turn back
I've lost it all thrown it away
A long way to fall a high price to pay
What will it take to make me see
There's too much at stake I'm losing me
Will I see the light before it's too late
As I reach for my pipe change will just have to wait.
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Copyright 2005 HiImFromJupiter
Published on Friday, January 21, 2005.
Filed under:
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Comments on "Downward Spiral"
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A former member wrote:
to sum it up........amazingly truthful
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A former member wrote:
i like the idea and i like the way you ended it. you did a nice job describing the addiction too. cool write. ..........................................................................................-samone
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On Friday, January 21, 2005, HiImFromJupiter
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On Friday, January 21, 2005, HiImFromJupiter
(11) wrote:
Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated
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On Friday, January 21, 2005, Dr Benway
(48) wrote:
Damn, been there. Diffrent drug, same oblivion.
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