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Hero Twice Removed
By violetflames
My muse hasn't given a tug of inspiration in a long while, I guess I will
try at it tonight...and see what comes out.
love is wretchid, love sees all
Love is blind and careless and cautious of one alone
Love is not a reality, but reality dwells in the choice
The soft eyes swallow deep in a corrosion of words
Lost in conversation, the signs thrown through glass
This abstraction of diction you despise aside from the function
Lost with the meaning, and unoticed when explained...
I find nothing in no one and you
seek your own.
Hero, you find yourself weakened
not by fear, or by insecurity
merely the loveliest of thoughts in a garden
of stars
that
represent
love is not
love is
love is all.
Hero, you find yourself daydreaming....
Her eyes say all that you need to remember...
"this is love."
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Copyright 2005 violetflames
Published on Tuesday, January 4, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Hero Twice Removed"
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On Tuesday, February 5, 2013, PoetessDarkly
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wrote:
wow this is an outstanding effort!
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A former member wrote:
i like it! kool poem!
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On Saturday, July 9, 2005, Metal Lullaby
(47) wrote:
this is beautiful
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On Thursday, March 17, 2005, avlar
(24) wrote:
i will remember this poem 4 ever
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On Thursday, January 6, 2005, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
Beautiful in a way that a open sky full of stars and the first spring blossoms are...thank you for this.
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On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, Gideon Lost
(138) wrote:
Garden of stars is great! Love the visual here. Also love the concept of day dreaming heroes.
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