Sharing Everything

By MyScarsStillBleed

I watch you walk to the mirror
I'm not sure if you're doing it to watch yourself
or to hide from me
When you turn back around the red runs down your chest
you've done it deeper than I expected
I wonder if I can be as brave
You squeeze at the wound making the blood flow faster
I'm shaking and wishing hard for a ciggarette
You slide the vile up and down your chest
It's slow to fill
You're covered in blood
When your chest is done you move on to your finger
pressing it hard into the blade
You seal the vile and had it to me
I'm shaking so bad I could almost die
finally I light my ciggarette
I clean you off
with my tounge
feeling all the power you posses
Now it is my turn
I give my blood to you
then I give myself to you
We are released at the same time
our chest fall and rise together
Or heartbeats are one
"I love you
forever
you are so beautiful so amazing"
I love you
forever
you are so perfect so amazing"
They might think we're strange
but who shares this devotion
this passion
You are with me even when you are gone
my mind soul and body are yours for all eternity

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Copyright 2004 David is amazing
Published on Sunday, December 19, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Angst Queen On Sunday, December 19, 2004, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    darkly beautiful. incredible lines, incredible imagery

  • K_Love On Sunday, December 19, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    "you've done it deeper than I expected I wonder if I can be as brave" Some great lines in this one. I agree with Storm sick and twisted. Awesome write.

  • A former member wrote: great write

  • Storm On Sunday, December 19, 2004, Storm (143)By person wrote:

    Sick and twisted, me likey.. very very nice write! ~s

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