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By Bleeding Tree

why did she have to go
so early and so young
the words i was too angry to say
still linger on my tongue
i never said i loved her
i didn't even try
i never thought of her hunger
oh what a way to die

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Copyright 2004 Bleeding Tree
Published on Wednesday, December 15, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • prodigy789 On Tuesday, June 26, 2012, prodigy789 (31)By person wrote:

    intense is all that describes this good job

  • A former member wrote: so sad beautifully written and expressed.

  • A former member wrote: wow...the last two lines it me like stray bullets...incredible that you have the talent to spill that much emotion into that amount of words...you are a master...applause and adoration. -zay

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