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forbidden fruit
By leyos
i want her
i need her
i love...
no i dont
i want someone
else that is
forbidden to me
yet are they
are they banned
from my existance
can i not talk
to them
those that are
succulant fruit
will i be happy
with them
or should i
stay with her
am i that attached
am i that needful
can i live
without her
can i touch
and feel
this forbidden
fruit
or are they
just that
forbbiden fruit
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Copyright 2004 leyos
Published on Saturday, December 11, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, September 22, 2005, Johny_D_Lewis
(467)
wrote:
nice twist of lust well put
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On Friday, December 31, 2004, AHHH
(187) wrote:
another nice write.
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On Friday, December 31, 2004, Philla
(95) wrote:
OoO this just flows man. LOVE IT! ~Amber Lynn
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A former member wrote:
this is very sensual and yet sad
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On Saturday, December 11, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
the formatting on lines five and six is very impressive; i like the double meaning hit i got when reading it... i also liked the way you handled the conclusion. nice write! welcome to dp. :)
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On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
hm..i like the concept here, it sorta makes me think of something I'm currently dealing with. great work
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