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By darkleprechaun
i remember you...
you used to tell me you loved me.
we used to wrestle together
and i wanted nothing more than to
be like my own personal superman
but as it turns out all your words were lies
all your actions simple deceptions and now
i know i was your cryptonite, you ran from me
you can't stop running... i wish i could...
i run from the pain every day... i come back to
it every night and sometimes it over takes my minds sight.
i tell myself i'm over it but i can't be, ever!
thanks for ruining my one chance at redemption.
thanks for taking everything that meant anything to me,
but most importantly, thank you for teaching me how not to
feel... sometimes i try and remember... too painful... nevermind not worth
the cost so i shut it off again.
thanks dad.
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Copyright 2004 uglybutpsychothingsevenout
Published on Saturday, November 27, 2004.
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On Tuesday, January 26, 2010, Deaths Apostle
(65)
wrote:
Aww...Daddy issues...lmfao
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A former member wrote:
This is deep and well written. Much appreciation for this work!
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A former member wrote:
well this poem has meaning behind the meaning and it is true that the past can cause far to much pain to handle i know the feeling of that indeed but you conveyed your emotions rather well it was quite good, you have my interest.
~Heretic
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On Sunday, January 30, 2005, Grey Lies
(186) wrote:
thanks for this write...portrays my father very well,I now know the true meaning to this poem...your "innocence" shattered..
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On Tuesday, December 7, 2004, darkleprechaun
(56) wrote:
first, thank you all of you. secondly, NO! diviana is not slow... very obsorbant... and well written. and thirdly and most importantly i hope you people get something... anything from these dark drops of lonely, meaningless blood.
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On Friday, December 10, 2004, Trapped_with_Insanity
(112) wrote:
Thank you : )
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On Saturday, December 4, 2004, whisperer
(166) wrote:
awshum...-]darkness[-
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Grey Lies
(186) wrote:
Diviana is slow..i only read it once...or maybe twice..it doesnt count i was umm distracted...well to the main point..ooo i likey..sry im kinda feelin all goofy...yea!!!....mufasa.. I LOVE GRAPEFRUITS!!!
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A former member wrote:
awesome write
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On Saturday, November 27, 2004, ShadowFlight
(105) wrote:
anger acted upon is violence and destruction... flowing from a pen it is something else... builds instead of destroys... superb write
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On Saturday, November 27, 2004, darkleprechaun
(56) wrote:
glad you got something from it...
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On Saturday, November 27, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
well thats what poetry is all about, aint it :O)
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On Saturday, November 27, 2004, Trapped_with_Insanity
(112) wrote:
Monkey...I wonder about you sometimes
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On Saturday, November 27, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
I used to wrestle with my best friend.. made me question my sexuality .. but that not what that this was about.. but it made just as much sense
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