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Words in thy mind
By whispers in the night
Sharp, cold, dark,knife,coffee,tears, blood, stains, life
Slut, fake, make-believe, hard, steel, love, peace, not seen
Wilt, rot, piercing, lie, reborn, gone, lonely, die
Water, fire, murder, shot, flowers, fairies, morning, night
Soft, crimson, sweat, sheets, confused, reckless, nightmares, sleep
Salty, dewdrops, wind, dry, silk, velvet, torn, broken, memories,
Cry
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Copyright 2004 cidney elizabeth
Published on Thursday, November 25, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Words in thy mind"
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On Sunday, December 5, 2004, island warrior
(210)
wrote:
Unusual style but you make it work, well done.
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A former member wrote:
its amazing how much those words alone say... nice write
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A former member wrote:
those words are what i can relate to...the words that are always swimming around in my fucked up head.
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, A Broken Soul
(80) wrote:
hmm... similar thoughts in my mind... not in that form though. intereseting. ^autumn^
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On Thursday, November 25, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
and I just rhymed :|
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, whispers in the night
(11) wrote:
haha, you did
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On Thursday, November 25, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
I've done something similiar to this before, one before I went into the hospital and one after I came back, quite a difference in the two. I think its a creative thing to do. nice.. ;)
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, whispers in the night
(11) wrote:
it is really interesting to experiment with new kinds of writing
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