ME??just KILLING my SELF! !

By BLACKSAINT

Life...life is a bitch

life will bring you to your knees,
make you cry out to the fucken world"GOD WHY ME"?

lifes an asshole,
wherever i go
it will corrupt my soul.

wherever i may be,
life keeps killing me!

why see life,
when ill soon see death?
why hurt inside,
when i can take my last breath,
by popping some pills,
and put a hole in my chest!!!!


hope yall love this on as much as i
did writing it :) -Black_Saint-

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Copyright 2004 BLACKSAINT
Published on Saturday, November 20, 2004.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: oh man so simple yet so nice, me likey alot

  • A former member wrote: This is so true! Great write!

  • A former member wrote: i think we often forget the good things in life as well... im not sure what to say so im not going to say anything

  • BLACKSAINT On Saturday, November 20, 2004, BLACKSAINT (39)By person wrote:

    to let all know i did not exactly write this one,to mean that i actualy want this its just one of my views on life

  • A former member wrote: OMFG EXACTLY!!!!!!!!!!! LETS KYLL R SELFS AT THE SAYME TYME> THAT WOULD B KOOL!!!! LUV THE RYME!

  • BLACKSAINT On Tuesday, August 2, 2005, BLACKSAINT (39)By person wrote:

    thats fucked up you love my work but you said that one of my works was shit???harsh

  • Malice In Wonderland On Saturday, December 2, 2006, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    it's called SARCASM, ass. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: If six reads this he'll have a fucking hayday. Interesting point of view but then again why not see life as opposed to nothing? Even when life gets shitty it's still always an interesting ride. ~Ship! Scholar

  • BLACKSAINT On Saturday, November 20, 2004, BLACKSAINT (39)By person wrote:

    i agree but this is not my strongest views of life, just one of them.:>

  • A former member wrote: That's cool. I think everyone has these thoughts at some point just realize that to some who have actually seen the "daggers edge" that this kind of talk might piss them off:)

  • A former member wrote: No matter the spelling mistakes I was hear to read poetry not correct spelling! I think it was good!

  • BLACKSAINT On Saturday, November 20, 2004, BLACKSAINT (39)By person wrote:

    well think ya

  • A former member wrote: hilarious

  • A former member wrote: Add another p to popping as well. *wink*

  • BLACKSAINT On Saturday, November 20, 2004, BLACKSAINT (39)By person wrote:

    thanks

  • A former member wrote: Oh, it hurts the eyes. x_x

  • Malice In Wonderland On Saturday, November 20, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    Agreed. Scholar

  • Malice In Wonderland On Saturday, November 20, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    By the way...Unless you are talking of someone corru[pting your SHOES the spelling your looking for is S-O-U-L. Scholar

  • BLACKSAINT On Saturday, November 20, 2004, BLACKSAINT (39)By person wrote:

    thats fucked up why u dont like me i don't know,but thanks for helping correct me.

  • Malice In Wonderland On Saturday, November 20, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    okay, lets retry this then, I am VERY against suicide, cutting,ALL that bullshit...your flow is childish and somewhat choppy, and no offense, but you need work... Scholar

  • Malice In Wonderland On Saturday, November 20, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    I'm just giving me opinion, I don't dislike you, I don't know you...so how can I form an opinion on you? Scholar

  • BLACKSAINT On Saturday, November 20, 2004, BLACKSAINT (39)By person wrote:

    well thank you and that is true i gess not all agree to it so thats kool i respect that...

  • Malice In Wonderland On Saturday, November 20, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    hm, Childish Rhymes, bitching about how hard you have it and why you should kill yourself...all offense intended, this really blows...Kya Scholar

  • A former member wrote: love it! Scholar

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