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this Loves, TOO FUCKed-up to be....
By BLACKSAINT
the day i met u it all went well,
u'r smile, u'r cheeks, u'r since of smell,
u were my angel, my everything,
now u'r nothing but a FUCKen memory fading,
u were the first to enter my life,
u were my friend my FUCKen paradise,
my heart sunk when we broke-up,
thats when i knew i was realy FUCKed up,
thats why i ask"is this love too FUCKed-up to be"
does it feel good,the pain,the FUCKen heartache u caused me
i needed u'r heart to open up,
was it u or just my FUCKen Luck?!...
BLACK SAINT 666...
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Copyright 2004 BLACKSAINT
Published on Thursday, November 18, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "this Loves, TOO FUCKed-up to be...."
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On Thursday, November 18, 2004, darkleprechaun
(56)
wrote:
well done... i enjoyed this much... word of advise though, women are vile beasts.
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On Saturday, November 20, 2004, BLACKSAINT
(39) wrote:
right i feel you ,know that one
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On Thursday, November 18, 2004, whisperer
(166) wrote:
not bad not bad at all...word of advice, use your* other than that...welcome...-]darkness[-
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On Thursday, November 18, 2004, sIo
(926) wrote:
damn. powerful. i like it. good job.
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