In the Scattered Nothingness

By xSightxSetxHighx

The great grey nothingness
that has made over my mind
I try to breathe but your memory sufficates me
Hide inside the essence of your soul, only darkness
Beneath the sunny sky, i feel warm
Into the night, your chilly pressence makes me more numb than before
Create a wall for nothing to break through
And let me live with myself as i want to be

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Copyright 2004 xSightxSetxHighx
Published on Monday, November 15, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • JiNx On Monday, November 15, 2004, JiNx (98)By person wrote:

    Your a terrific poet, welcome to DP! Great write.... -JiNx(ie)

  • A former member wrote: on the mark,deep and raw

  • mysticventures On Monday, November 15, 2004, mysticventures (538)By person wrote:

    killer last line !!!!!!! nice :)

  • Nesfurata On Monday, November 15, 2004, Nesfurata (58)By person wrote:

    This is a great write. I love the imagery and the way you expressed the pain and torment. Great job -Elizabeth

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