Upon My Dreams

By Guttercat

Between the hours do I sleep
Laying feathers beneath your feet
A whisper's touch, a kiss sublime
Tread, oh love, upon my dreams

In my slumber thirst tis slaked
Please don't shake me least I wake
Due time hath ceased & thou art mine
Sleep, oh love, upon my dreams

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Copyright 2004 Guttercat
Published on Thursday, November 4, 2004.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: It becomes torture to know we will only see them in our dreams..

  • purr_verse On Friday, November 5, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    lovely, lovely write... feels like velvet from another era.

  • flying_fox On Friday, November 5, 2004, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    oh purr purr purr purr purrrrrrrrrrrr... what luscious words... like strawberries dipped in cream. Please forgive my ignorance though... what does 'slaked' mean?

  • Guttercat On Friday, November 5, 2004, Guttercat (30)By person wrote:

    Gracious fox, I found bliss in ignorance. 'Slaked' tis but a word to satisfy the thirst of mine soul...

  • A former member wrote: oh my god, a love poem that I actually like, someone should check hell to see if it's snowing.....seriously I did get caught in some kind of pleasent rhythem when reading this whomever you wrote this for should be flattered

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