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This Could Be Hard To Kill
By agentlemenspromise
Discontinued thoughts are the ones that choke me up
But you make me gasp for air
I’ve hung myself with what I think you are
But I know I love you
Its picturesque and I’ve tried to kill it
I’m in love with your presence even though you know ill fill my
lungs with lies to keep it from you
I just want to hold you long enough to write about longing
I want us to hurt enough to write of hate and tragedy
You could keep me awake at night cascading into tomorrow
...I hope this doesn’t last another hour...
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Copyright 2004 agentlemenspromise
Published on Wednesday, October 27, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "This Could Be Hard To Kill"
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A former member wrote:
i love this writing
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A former member wrote:
solid and fluid, yet fragile. absolutely killer. i love your work. -zay
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On Saturday, November 6, 2004, sIo
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wrote:
god! i love your writing
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On Monday, November 1, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
I like the title of this one...my heart breaks every time I read your works. You are a good writer. =)
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A former member wrote:
.. "just want to hold you long enough to write about longing" eee. I loved this.
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